Colin changed from trying to find cures for cancer or talking to the queen to get the best doctor in the world to starting to be more realistic.
“If they’ve even got a 1 (a cure for cancer).
This shows that Colin started to mature and grow up and started to realise that cancer is more serious and he didn’t have enough education to go to South Africa to see the ancient tribes for the cure “If they have even got a cure”.
March 18, 2013 at 8:10 pm
You have extended yourself really well, coming up with original ideas and supported them with a brilliant well-selected example. It was South America that Colin was thinking he would need to visit.
You’re ready for more extended writing now!