The storm seller was shaking lights blinking on and off
I listen closely distant screams could be heard it felt like the end off the world , houses soaring through the air , birds pinned under cars .
I looked around me I saw a bare metal room with no heating and darkness on and off .
I heard my house strip off the ground above me I felt scared and alone.
It suddenly went cold I shivered I looked for a blanket , I found one I grabbed it up but suddenly i saw a rat bigger than a spider but smaller than a mouse but then it was gone then the shelf fell .
The storm seller flew in the giant angry vortex of wind , cold tears feel down my cheeks and I looked straight into the hurricane .
July 8, 2013 at 10:48 am
I really like your work like it the end of the world humanity is like it finished the word bird pinned under cars were really good houses soaring through the world that made me surprised like it the end but the only critising thing is u made like a story book using I like I shivered I looked for a blanket that sound like a story
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