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Mr Waugh’s Feedback on your Dystopia

First, let me say that you have produced a piece of writing that represents the effort of a serious student, you have worked hard to incorporate some of the grammar and writing techniques we’ve been learning in class. Strengths: This… Continue Reading →

Your Peers’ Feedback on your Dystopia

1st reading passport entry

So far I’ve read Shadow Forest , it’s a very good book about Samuel and Martha who’s  mum and dad die in a car crash caused by logs so they go to stay with their aunt Eda who’s house is… Continue Reading →

The Final Piece

Work:Write a dystopian story using relative clauses , subordinate clauses , etc ,etc Revenge of the Robots by Jameel Scott-Muhammad Summray: It was a cold rainy winter’s day in a town that was always raining in a year that was… Continue Reading →

Subordinate clauses

Write the paragraph in simple sentences. Winston Smiths chin nuzzled into his chest in an effort to escape the vile wind. Winston Smith slipped through the doors of Victory Mansion but not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty… Continue Reading →

Subordinate CLauses

Rewrite this paragraph  in simple sentences. IT was a bright cold day in April . The clocks were striking  thirteen . Winston Smith’s chin nuzzled into his chest .  In an effort to escape the vile wind .  He slipped… Continue Reading →

Relative Clauses

Joining sentences using ,who and whose. The  man who walked down the middle of the road beckoned for me to join him.

Introduction

Hi my name is Jameel I’m 12 years old , I live in brixton , London , I like swimming and sailing . And I’m just starting my blog .

This is Your Online Domain

  Hello and welcome to your personal online journal. This platform has been created to enhance and enrich your learning at the London Nautical School. Its purpose is to provide you with an audience for your work (or work-in-progress) and… Continue Reading →

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